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Wives and husbands: the hidden person of the heart 3:1–7
vv. 1–2 — the wife's submission, and the winning without a word
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Likewise wives, be subject to your own husbands,independent — imperatival participle — the household code continues (2:13, 18); τοῖς ἰδίοις: their own husbands, not men generally
so that even if some disobey the word,conditional — the ἵνα opens the purpose, then the real protasis intrudes — leans on the promise below
they may be won without a word through the conduct of their wives,purpose — the ἵνα's own verb — the missionary hope: ἄνευ λόγου answers τῷ λόγῳ, conduct where the word was refused
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when they observe your pure conduct carried out in reverence.participial — the occasion of the winning — ἐν φόβῳ read of reverence toward God (1:17; 2:17), not fear of the husband
vv. 3–4 — the adornment antithesis: not the outside but the hidden person
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Let your adornment not be the external one — braiding of hair and wearing of gold or putting on of garments —relative — continuative relative on γυναῖκες — the κόσμος held to the line's end, after the braiding-gold-clothing list
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but the hidden person of the heart,phrase modifier — the ἔστω carried over — the counter-adornment: what no eye but God's inspects
in the imperishable beauty of a gentle and quiet spirit,phrase modifier — τὸ ἄφθαρτον — the imperishable against gold that perishes (1:18)
which is very precious in God's sight.relative — neuter ὅ — the whole imperishable adornment; πολυτελές, God's own price-word set against the χρυσία
vv. 5–6 — the precedent: the holy women, and Sarah
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For in this way the holy women of old who hoped in God also adorned themselves,independent — γάρ — the ground from sacred history; their hope in God defines them
being subject to their own husbands,participial — their adornment was the submission of v. 1 — the same words repeated
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as Sarah obeyed Abraham,comparative — the named example — the matriarch herself
calling him lord;participial — Gen 18:12 — Sarah's κύριος, spoken there only to herself, taken as her habit of honor
and you have become her childrenrelative — on Σάρρα — Gentile wives made daughters of Sarah, as believers are sons of Abraham
if you do good and do not fear any intimidation.participial — conditional-force participles — doing good, unafraid of any πτόησις (Prov 3:25 LXX)
v. 7 — husbands: knowledge, honor, unhindered prayer
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Husbands likewise, dwelling with your wives with understanding,independent — imperatival participle again — the code's one word to the stronger party: live together κατὰ γνῶσιν
showing honor to the woman as the weaker vessel,participial — both are σκεύη — hers the frailer; the comparative concedes his advantage only to command honor
and as fellow heirs of the grace of life,comparative — nominative — husbands joint-heirs with their wives (some witnesses read the dative: honoring them as co-heirs); in grace, no weaker vessel
so that your prayers may not be hindered.purpose — εἰς τό + infinitive — dishonor at home cuts the line of prayer
One mind, blessing for reviling — Psalm 34 3:8–12
vv. 8–9 — the five virtues, and blessing instead of retaliation
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Finally, all of you: of one mind, sympathetic, loving as brothers, tenderhearted, humble in mind,independent — verbless — five adjectives framed by ὁμόφρονες and ταπεινόφρονες, the code widened to all
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not repaying evil for evil or insult for insult,participial — the implied imperative carried on — the non-retaliation of 2:23 made the community's rule
but on the contrary blessing,participial — the exchange reversed — a blessing paid out for the insult received
because to this you were called,cause — the ground — the call of 2:21 again: εἰς τοῦτο, to this very exchange
that you might inherit a blessing.purpose — epexegetic to εἰς τοῦτο — bless, and inherit blessing: the two εὐλογ- words answer each other
vv. 10–12 — Ps 34:12–16 (LXX 33:13–17), quoted without a formula
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For the one who desires to love life and to see good days —cause — Ps 34:12 — the psalm enters on bare γάρ, its suspended subject grounding the whole call to bless
let him keep his tongue from evil and his lips from speaking deceit;independent — Ps 34:13 — the psalm's own imperative resumes the suspended subject: the tongue first (v. 9's λοιδορία)
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let him turn away from evil and do good;independent — Ps 34:14a — from speech to deed: the ἀγαθοποιεῖν of the whole letter
let him seek peace and pursue it.independent — Ps 34:14b — peace not merely kept but hunted
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For the eyes of the Lord are on the righteous,cause — Ps 34:15 — the psalm's own ground, verbless: the watching eyes
and his ears are open to their prayer;cause — the listening ears — the προσευχαί of v. 7 heard
but the face of the Lord is against those who do evil.cause — Ps 34:16a — the citation stops before the psalm's 'to destroy them': the face set, the doom left unquoted
Suffering for righteousness: the ready defense 3:13–17
vv. 13–14 — who will harm you? blessed even if you should suffer
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And who is the one who will harm you,independent — verbless question with future participle — echoing Isa 50:9: who is he that will do you evil?
if you become zealous for what is good?conditional — backward protasis on the question — zealots for the good, the letter's ἀγαθοποιεῖν made a passion
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But even if you should suffer for righteousness' sake,conditional — the rare OPTATIVE πάσχοιτε — suffering as remote possibility, not expectation; leans on the beatitude below
you are blessed.independent — the one-word apodosis — the beatitude of Matt 5:10 in a single verbless word
Do not fear what they fear, nor be troubled,independent — Isa 8:12 — αὐτῶν read as the fear they inspire; the prophet's word to the conspiracy-frightened
vv. 15–16 — sanctify Christ as Lord: the defense with gentleness
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but sanctify Christ as Lord in your hearts,independent — Isa 8:13 continued — τὸν Χριστόν set where the LXX has the LORD of hosts (later witnesses restore τὸν θεόν)
always ready to make a defensephrase modifier — verbless readiness — the inner sanctifying issues in a standing preparedness
to everyone who asks you for a reason for the hope that is in you,phrase modifier — the court is anyone who asks — a λόγος rendered concerning the hope, the letter's keyword (1:3, 21)
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but with gentleness and reverence,phrase modifier — the manner of the defense — the πραΰς spirit of v. 4, and fear toward God, not the askers
keeping a good conscience,participial — the defense's silent partner — the conscience that reappears in baptism's ἐπερώτημα (v. 21)
so that, in the very matter in which you are slandered, those who revile your good conduct in Christ may be put to shame.purpose — ἐν ᾧ — in the point of the slander itself (cf. 2:12); the shame changes sides
v. 17 — the maxim: better for doing good
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For it is better, doing good —independent — the maxim suspended — κρεῖττον with its ἐστίν elided, the participle waiting for its infinitive
if the will of God should so will,conditional — the second OPTATIVE — a parenthesis: even this suffering only if the willing Will wills it
to suffer, than for doing evil.content — the subject-infinitive lands — better to suffer as doers of good than as doers of evil
Christ's suffering and victory: the spirits, the flood, baptism, the throne 3:18–22
vv. 18–19 — the once-for-all suffering, and the proclamation to the spirits
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Because Christ also suffered once for sins,cause — ὅτι grounds the maxim of v. 17 — Christ the proof that suffering for good is better; ἅπαξ: once, unrepeatable
the righteous for the unrighteous,phrase modifier — apposition — the substitution in four words; the δίκαιος suffering διὰ δικαιοσύνην (v. 14) to the uttermost
that he might bring you to God,purpose — the purpose — προσάγειν, the word of presentation at court and at the altar
having been put to death in the fleshparticipial — μέν — the first of the pair; dative of sphere: in the realm of flesh, men killed him
but made alive in the spirit;participial — δέ — the answering member: in the realm of the Spirit, God made him alive — the resurrection, not a disembodied state
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in which also he went and proclaimed to the spirits in prison,relative — the crux — read as the risen Christ's proclamation of victory to the imprisoned spirits of Gen 6:1–4 (1 Enoch's watchers); not a descensus offer to the human dead, nor Christ preaching through Noah
vv. 20–22 — Noah's flood, baptism's antitype, the session at God's right hand
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who formerly disobeyed,participial — the spirits identified by their ancient revolt — ἀπειθεῖν, the letter's word for unbelief (2:8; 3:1)
when God's patience kept waiting in the days of Noah,conditional — ὅτε-temporal — the longsuffering personified, waiting out the hundred and twenty years (Gen 6:3)
while the ark was being prepared,participial — genitive absolute — every plank of the building a measure of the patience
into which a few — that is, eight souls — were brought safely through water.relative — the little flock in the ark — ὀλίγοι, like the exiles of Asia; δι' ὕδατος both through and by means of the water
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which water, as an antitype, now saves you — baptism —relative — ὃ with ὕδωρ as antecedent — the flood-water finds its ἀντίτυπον in baptism's water: judgment passed through, not around
not as a removal of dirt from the fleshphrase modifier — the negative definition — no mere bath; σάρξ again the outer sphere (v. 18)
but as the appeal of a good conscience toward God,phrase modifier — ἐπερώτημα read as appeal (some: pledge) — the good conscience of v. 16 turned Godward in the water
through the resurrection of Jesus Christ,phrase modifier — with σῴζει — the water saves only through the risen One; ζῳοποιηθείς (v. 18) is the engine of the sacrament
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who is at the right hand of God,relative — the session — Ps 110:1, the sentence's landing place: from suffering to the throne
having gone into heaven,participial — πορευθείς again — the same journey-verb as v. 19: one triumphal progress, proclamation to enthronement
with angels and authorities and powers subjected to him.participial — genitive absolute — ὑποτάσσω, the code's own verb (3:1, 5), spoken last of the cosmos: every power under the sufferer