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The prayer and the misdirected zeal 10:1–4
vv. 1–2 — the prayer, and the zeal it grieves over
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Brothers, my heart's desire and my prayer to God for them is for their salvation.independent — verbless — ἐστίν supplied; μέν anticipates an unspoken contrast
2
For I testify about themindependent — the γάρ ground of the prayer — Paul vouches for his kinsmen
that they have a zeal for God,content — the concession — real zeal (Paul knew it firsthand, Phil 3:6)
but not according to knowledge.phrase modifier — the fatal qualifier — ἔχουσιν carried over: zeal uninformed
vv. 3–4 — the wrong righteousness, and the law's τέλος
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For being ignorant of the righteousness of God,participial — fronted causal participle — leans on ὑπετάγησαν below
and seeking to establish their own,participial — fronted — the rival project, leaning on the same clause
they did not submit to God's righteousness.independent — the indictment's finite verb — submission refused
4
For Christ is the end of the law for righteousness to everyone who believes.independent — the verbless thesis — τέλος as goal-and-terminus: the law's aim reached, its tenure as a way to righteousness over
The two righteousnesses speak 10:5–8
v. 5 — law-righteousness: do, and live
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For Moses writes about the righteousness that is based on the law,independent — the first speaker — Moses, for the righteousness ἐκ νόμου
that the person who does the commandments shall live by them.content — Lev 18:5 — life contingent on doing
vv. 6–8 — faith-righteousness speaks: no quest, the word is near
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But the righteousness that is by faith speaks like this:independent — the counter-speaker — righteousness personified, voicing Deut 30
'Do not say in your heart,content — Deut 30:12 (opening as Deut 9:4) — the prohibition
"Who will ascend into heaven?"'content — the forbidden question — the upward quest
(that is, to bring Christ down),phrase modifier — gloss 1, on ἀναβήσεται — as if to fetch Christ down: the incarnation has happened
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'or "Who will descend into the abyss?"'content — the twin question — Deut 30:13's sea become the abyss
(that is, to bring Christ up from the dead).phrase modifier — gloss 2, on καταβήσεται — as if to raise Christ: the resurrection has happened
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But what does it say?independent — the pivot — from the two prohibitions to the affirmation
'The word is near you, in your mouth and in your heart' —content — Deut 30:14 — the word near; mouth and heart seed vv. 9–10
that is, the word of faith that we proclaim;phrase modifier — gloss 3, on τὸ ῥῆμα — the near word is the preached gospel
Confession and the universal promise 10:9–13
vv. 9–10 — mouth and heart: the confession and its chiasm
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because if you confess with your mouth that Jesus is Lordconditional — protasis 1 — ὅτι unpacks the word of faith (v. 8); leans on σωθήσῃ below
and believe in your heartconditional — protasis 2 — the inward half
that God raised him from the dead,content — the content of the believing — the resurrection
you will be saved.independent — apodosis — one word, the whole promise
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For with the heart one believes and is justified,cause — chiasm line 1 — v. 9's mouth–heart order reversed: heart-faith unto righteousness
and with the mouth one confesses and is saved.cause — chiasm line 2 — mouth-confession unto salvation
vv. 11–13 — everyone: Isaiah and Joel widen the promise
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For the Scripture says,cause — the scriptural warrant for the promise
'Everyone who believes in him will not be put to shame.'content — Isa 28:16 (as at 9:33) — with Paul's added Πᾶς
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For there is no distinction between Jew and Greek;cause — why 'everyone' — no distinction (echoing 3:22)
for the same Lord is Lord of all,cause — why no distinction — one and the same Lord (verbless)
bestowing his riches on all who call on him.participial — the Lord characterized — rich toward all who call
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For 'everyone who calls on the name of the Lord will be saved.'cause — Joel 2:32 (LXX 3:5) — the promise sealed; the name of the LORD, read of Jesus (v. 9)
The sending chain 10:14–15
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How then will they call on him in whom they have not believed?independent — question 1 — calling presupposes believing
And how are they to believe in him of whom they have never heard?independent — question 2, on ἐπίστευσαν — believing presupposes hearing
And how are they to hear without someone preaching?independent — question 3, on ἤκουσαν — hearing presupposes a herald
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And how are they to preachindependent — question 4, on κηρύσσοντος — preaching presupposes sending
unless they are sent?conditional — backward protasis — the chain's last link: the sender
As it is written,comparative — the sending warranted from Scripture
'How beautiful are the feet of those who bring good news!'content — Isa 52:7 — the beautiful feet of the sent
Unbelieving Israel — they heard, and they knew 10:16–21
vv. 16–17 — not all obeyed: faith from hearing
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But not all have obeyed the gospel.independent — the sad turn — the chain ran, yet not all obeyed
For Isaiah says,cause — unbelief itself foretold
'Lord, who has believed what he has heard from us?'content — Isa 53:1 — the servant's report (ἀκοή) disbelieved
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So faith comes from hearing,independent — the ἄρα inference — distilled from Isaiah's ἀκοή (verbless)
and hearing through the word of Christ.independent — the chain restated, on ἀκοῆς — back to the ῥῆμα (v. 8), now 'of Christ'
v. 18 — did they not hear? they did
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But I ask,independent — the diatribe formula — the first excuse tried on Israel's behalf
have they not heard?content — μὴ οὐκ — the question expects 'surely they did hear'
Indeed they have:independent — the emphatic retort — 'on the contrary, indeed'
'Their voice has gone out to all the earth,content — Ps 19:4 (LXX 18:5) — the heavens' worldwide speech as warrant
and their words to the ends of the world.'content — Ps 19:4 — the second colon, ἐξῆλθεν carried over
vv. 19–21 — did Israel not know? Moses and Isaiah testify
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But I ask,independent — the second excuse tried — perhaps Israel did not understand?
did Israel not understand?content — μὴ οὐκ again — they knew; the witnesses prove it
First Moses says,independent — witness 1 — Moses, at the head of the line
'I will make you jealous of those who are not a nation;content — Deut 32:21 — jealousy by a 'non-nation' (seeding 11:11, 14)
with a foolish nation I will make you angry.'content — Deut 32:21 — the chiastic second colon: anger by a senseless nation
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Then Isaiah is so bold as to say,independent — witness 2 — Isaiah's daring (ἀποτολμᾷ, only here in the NT)
'I was found by those who did not seek me;content — Isa 65:1 — found by non-seekers: the Gentiles
I revealed myself to those who did not ask for me.'content — Isa 65:1 — the parallel colon: manifest to non-askers
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But concerning Israel he says,independent — the address turns — the same prophet, now πρὸς τὸν Ἰσραήλ
'All day long I have held out my hands to a disobedient and contrary people.'content — Isa 65:2 — the outstretched hands: the chapter closes on God still reaching